"I like how you added lots of details."
"You need more dialogue."
"You need to add some transition words."
"This part was a little confusing. What is happening?"
"I like how you ended your story by saying what you learned."
These were some of the comments I overheard as students worked in partners to revise their writing. After several weeks of writing personal narrative stories the students are moving towards publishing their pieces. They had some wonderful suggestions and advice for their peers.
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